Tuesday 18 November 2008

Feedback grade #1

Toby/Saad,

There is clear evidence of discussion and planning and your textual analysis is focused, however the posts are too short. You need to review these and also comment in detail on your mood boards.

Also - 3 out of 4 textual analysis say that they were posted by Saad - Toby can you confirm which are your two?

Currently this is a 3+ so you need to add more detail for a level 4. Invest the time for these vital planning marks - they can make or break a grade.

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